Script #1: The Intentionally Imperfect Approach (65% Reply Rate)

From: Anton Titov, Archway.Finance - a fintech startup allowing cross border payments

hi [first name]

noticed you're doing [specific work] with digital agencies in [region]. we built a payment solution that helps you receive money from us/europe clients without delays or high fees.

what's your biggest challenge with receiving international payments currently?

Why it works: Deliberately casual formatting (lowercase letters, simple language) makes it feel authentically human rather than automated. Direct question about their specific pain point.

https://youtu.be/8ECtMHazy-M?feature=shared


Script #2: The Value Creation Script (55% Reply Rate)

From: Mattia Bizzoni, Bizzoni Marketing - a B2B lead generation agency

Thanks for connecting [Name]!

I would like to do a quick call to show what I created for [company name] - a system that gets you 10-15 qualified leads per month without any ad spend.

When could we do a quick call to go through it?

Why it works: Immediately positions having created something specifically for them, creates curiosity with specific metrics, and ends with a simple call-to-action that requires minimal effort to respond.

https://youtu.be/JmfB1-wcEJs?feature=shared


Script #3: The Technical Recruiter Script (47% Reply Rate)

From: Greg Hurwitz, Flint Catalyst - a Recruiter

Thanks for connecting [Name]!

I was searching profiles with experience in [specific skill] and noticed yours. [Company] is looking for a [job title] to help with [brief description of role importance].

Is this something that might interest you? [Link to application]

Why it works: Clear, direct purpose without salesiness. Shows you specifically selected them rather than mass-messaging. Provides easy next step with minimal commitment.

https://youtu.be/ivwR4Y1zQo8?feature=shared


Script #4: The Market Research Template (21% Reply Rate)

From: Peter Jenkins, Skin Federation - a female skincare brand