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Wrong: "Hi, I help companies with marketing"
Right: "Hi {{firstName}}, noticed {{companyName}} is scaling rapidly. How are you handling the increased lead demand?"
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Wrong: "I'm John from XYZ Agency, we've worked with 500+ companies..."
Right: "Quick question - are you happy with your current lead generation results?"
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Wrong: Including website, calendar link, and case study PDF
Right: One clear call-to-action maximum
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Wrong: "Did you see my last message? Just checking in..."
Right: "Just helped a similar company increase leads by 40%. Thought you'd find it interesting."
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Wrong: Sending InMails to first-degree connections
Right: Using regular messaging for connected prospects
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